Comments To Other People's Final Papers

To Gavin McCarthy:
"I enjoyed your paper a lot, and i liked how you connected it back to your lifestyle and how longboarding is healthy for your lifestyle. Most people connect their papers to our society, but i think it was nice to see how you could connect this paper to your own life. it shows that you did learn a lot from this course. However, i would also like to read about how you think we as Americans can change our lifestyles, and compare it to your lifestyle. However this is just a suggestion, and does not need to be done. Overall i liked your paper a lot."

To Marco Gonzalez:
i think you made a very interesting point in your last paragraph where you talk about how people need to learn to accept themselves and think for themselves, not be robots of this soceity. what you are saying is true, and makes a lot of sense, and im glad you wrote about it. this way when people read your paper who have not taken the course they too can see how we as Americans accept what is given to us and do not question it.
i also like how you compared your paper to animals, and remarked about how we too are animals.
good job (:

To Ian:
i think that you make a good point in your paper when you comapre the use of steriods and athletes to the way animals are injected with hormones. i also liked how you connected your paper back to your family lifestyle. good job (: